Copyright © 2011 Bob R Bogle
I am streamlining; I am cutting unnecessary material wherever I can; I am deciding how to nest flashbacks within flashbacks within flashbacks; I am laboring on keeping as sharp a focus as I can and on the flow of the prose. . . .Takes a while. All I can say for now is it's improving. Maybe start uploading within the coming several days.
I am streamlining; I am cutting unnecessary material wherever I can; I am deciding how to nest flashbacks within flashbacks within flashbacks; I am laboring on keeping as sharp a focus as I can and on the flow of the prose. . . .Takes a while. All I can say for now is it's improving. Maybe start uploading within the coming several days.
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