01 February 2013

Is this any way to write a book?

Copyright © 2013 Bob R Bogle


I've spent the last week thinking about the ultimate narrative structure that Memphis Blues Again should take.  Thinking about it a lot.  Trying to devise a scheme by which this Brobdingnagian human ballad can function as an aesthetic whole.  I hesitate to say "function as a novel."  I'm doubtful that the word "novel" captures what I have in mind.  I don't think of it as a novel anymore, although this vast, spreading slab of story will all be witnessed through the eyes (and other sensory and cognitive apparatus) of fictional characters.

The least common denominator of everything that happens in this book is geography.  Locations in space.  As far as locating events in time, that's a more problematic matter.  For that reason I've abandoned concerning myself with sequentiality; in fact, freeing myself from the shackles of strict cause and effect ought to make this a good deal easier to write; to read, well, we'll see.

The thing about a book is that it is a linear device:  one long chant, first word to last.  And I do want this to be a linear book, not a multi-layered collection of sedimentary stories cross-connected by hyperlinks.  So everything has to accrue in a manner that will make a certain amount of sense to the reader, even if the logic only comes clear incrementally.  Bearing this in mind, I've just divided the whole arc into fifty modules – I won't call them chapters.  These modules are simply intended to be blocks of notes and text.  I'm about to begin hacking up my first draft and redistributing it into these fifty modules, to which more notes and text will also be added.  When all that is done I'll start taking on these modules one by one, trying to shape them all into readable stories that all tie together.  It's almost as if I'm about to take the entire first draft, chew it up and swallow it, digest it into its fundamental elements, and try to reconstitute an entirely new body out of it.

I've never tried writing this way before.  I guess we'll find out what comes of it.

  

28 January 2013

Ronald D Smith's Book -- Thomas Ewing Jr.: Frontier Lawyer and Civil War General .



Historian Ron Smith discusses his new book Thomas Ewing Jr.: Frontier Lawyer and Civil War General. Smith takes readers back to Bleeding Kansas, with its border ruffians and land speculators, to show how Thomas Ewing Jr. and his family played pivotal roles in the history of Kansas, Missouri, and the nation. This event took place on October 21, 2009, at the Central Library, 14 W. 10th Street, Kansas City, MO.


Amazon link.


23 January 2013

Preparing for Draft 2.

Copyright © 2013 Bob R Bogle

I think last night I hit upon a strategy for writing the next iteration of this novel.

The first step will to be to generate a rather massive tree-like structure that connects all my many story threads not in time but in space.  What matters most is the intersecting locations, or nodes, where the paths cross.  This will take quite some time.  Afterwards I'll be rewriting everything to conform to the new blueprint; this will include generating a great deal of new material (although I've had much of it in mind for a few years now), and also transforming much of the material already set down in the first draft into a new form, especially taking expository material and relocating it in the actions and memories of heretofore unwritten scenes and characters.  When all this is accomplished, the second draft will be complete.

Eventaully, in a third draft, I should be able to cut and move big chunks of the massive text around into a more aesthetically-pleasing presentation, even as I'm honing and loping down the word count.  How long will all this take?

Umm . . . probably a couple years.

(I'm certain to also be writing some other stuff during this time frame.)